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Caught you, [livejournal.com profile] rhapsody11 :D But I had to work for it! Love having Rhapsy as a writing buddy... tonight we're neck and neck, tomorrow she'll pass me again. It's also wonderful doing NaNo with her because she's having so much fun with her characters and it keeps me inspired. It's very cool that just short of the 40k mark, I'm chasing someone who originally planned a half NaNo - 25k. There's a special magic in a story that just keeps growing.

BB2 has a beginning, a middle, and I can see the end but it'll need at least another 10k beyond the required 50. Needs lots and lots of editing for grammar and phrasing, cutting out the repetitions (one of my bad habits is saying the same thing in three different ways), taming dialogue that wanders off and has nothing to do with anything, and the rest of the joy that comes with a first draft. I always write a dirty first draft, so I know exactly what to expect - the usual horror, just way more of it *g*.

Everything's here that should be, and since I delete missteps and false starts as they happen, nothing's here that shouldn't be, except for a section that desperately needs a third character for balance. There's no time to go back and adjust scene after scene and write in dialogue and planning, so I stuck in track changes comments and it can wait till I edit. It won't change the content, just make it hold together better - an expansion, not a rewrite.

There's a chance Glorfindel may never forgive me for a certain little plot twist.

Date: 2012-11-26 06:22 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naledi-seren.livejournal.com
Congratulations - nearly there!

I know what you mean about the repetitions thing. I haven't read through my 1st draft yet, because I want to finish it first. But I know when I do I'm going to cringe. As a writer friend of mine says - crappy words on a page are better than no words at all. :-)

Date: 2012-11-27 16:11 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Not reading through the draft till it's done seems a good idea. I think it could end up being a bit confusing. I'm not looking forward to editing much, but crappy words can become good words - it just takes time, energy and lots of tea *g*.

Date: 2012-11-26 06:42 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scarlet1061.livejournal.com
There's a chance Glorfindel may never forgive me for a certain little plot twist.

Nea, he, being a veteran of hardships, can truly understand what a tight pressure may cause one to do :-P
Plus, he owes you from that time and place *wink*

It sounds like you're having a good time, and I am glad. And as for the editing.... I do remember hearing that last year. The resulting BB I read then, was well done, so I know this one will be too. :-)

Date: 2012-11-27 16:14 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
The funny thing is the Glorfindel sections are probably the cleanest writing in the whole file, which might be due to me wanting to get his mindset right. Well, right for the story. He might not agree 'right' is a good word choice *g*

Date: 2012-11-26 11:40 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
So very well done! I know what you mean about messy first drafts, mine will be cringe-worthy as well. But I'll also have the fun of looking through it again and seeing my characters develop and where they will go. That will make up for a lot. I expect I'll still be finishing this at the end of December and into January before I'm finally finished with my first draft. I'm SO VERY PROUD of both you and Rhapsody11. It's been great writing NaNo together with you!

- Erulisse (one L)

Date: 2012-11-27 17:22 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
It's great reading back and finding bits you forgot all about --- good or bad, LOL. I'll need to cut back what I have to around 60k to match the first part, but it's a running joke between me and Red that when I edit things get longer - BB1 grew by about 8k during editing. Ah well. Like you, that's January's problem. I have Binky's awards, the gen fic Yule and a gift fic to deal with in December, plus touching sides with my OEAM Big Bang.

That all looks rather intimidating written down *g*.

I just managed to catch Rhapsody again last night but she'll be in the lead again when she updates. I think having someone to share the final week's chase with is the most fun part of NaNo - I'm loving it.

Date: 2012-11-27 20:46 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
Fortunately I already have Binky's finished and I'm well on the way with my gen fic Yule piece. I will be doing art again for the Big Bang, so that doesn't even get assigned for a while yet so I have breathing room there. I do have to find or compose something appropriate for my Solstice cards and get those designed and made. I still want to paint my hi-tops with my LOTR facade and I have a beading project that is just begging to be designed.

But I have this NaNo novel.... and oh my, I just love my characters ... and they have SUCH a long way that they still need to go...

- Erulisse (one L)
Loving every minute of it...

Date: 2012-11-26 18:43 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaotic-binky.livejournal.com
Glorfindel will be so happy that he is in a good quality story that he will forgive anything lol

My BB is three quarters finished and should be well within the word limit :D

Date: 2012-11-27 16:50 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Oh wow, I almost forgot about your stunning BB idea. Glad it's going well :) As for Glorfindel, he's already looking at me with raised eyebrows :D

Date: 2012-11-26 20:08 (UTC)
ext_79824: (fan fic authors made me do it)
From: [identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com
Oooooo, you wrote more 161 words than I did yesterday *glares at a certain Fëanorian muse* Shut up Tyelko!

There's a special magic in a story that just keeps growing.

Hmmm yes, but it is starting to become epic at a point where I do start to wonder where it will end.

There's a chance Glorfindel may never forgive me for a certain little plot twist.

Tyelko just snorted, I swear. But no way he's going to end up in this current novel. Rangers only dude!

Date: 2012-11-27 16:41 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Don't ever tell them they're not allowed, they WILL find a way after that.

Epic is good :) It will end where it ends. Mine has the potential for a part three but I'm not listening!

I think I ended up about 120 words ahead of you. I don't know how much value part of that has to the story. I enjoyed writing it but it's a bit self indulgent and meant I still need to get to the point of the section. That would be tonight's work, yes :(

Date: 2012-11-26 21:31 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melusine6619.livejournal.com
Hey, you're nearly there! Well done!

Date: 2012-11-27 16:31 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Cross your fingers for me, I need about 9.5k :)

Date: 2012-11-27 00:03 (UTC)
ext_403546: (colours)
From: [identity profile] nelyo-russandol.livejournal.com
There's a chance Glorfindel may never forgive me for a certain little plot twist.

Offer him a big slice of chocolate cake after the end of the story and he'll forgive you.

You're almost there. Well done! :o)

Date: 2012-11-27 16:29 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
We might need to share a whole cake between us by that point *g*. I feel bad about him, he's normally the ultimate 'nice guy' in my fics.

Thanks :) I have to write a bit under 10k in four days and then hope the site counts the same as Word did *whimper*

Date: 2012-11-27 03:34 (UTC)
minuial_nuwing: (Border Patrol)
From: [personal profile] minuial_nuwing
**shakes pom poms**

On the downhill run now! I am so looking forward to BB2. *g*

Date: 2012-11-27 16:21 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
I vaguely dread reading this from the beginning *g*. I remember a lot of 'I wrote that? really?' why?' moments with BB. I'm not doing much with it till January, I have Binky's awards, the gen fic Yule and something for Elfscribe to work on in December, plus add a bit to the OEAM Big Bang.

Actually, reading over that, playing with BB2 might be a welcome escape *g*

*hugs*

Date: 2012-11-28 06:11 (UTC)
hhimring: Estel, inscription by D. Salo (Default)
From: [personal profile] hhimring
How wonderful!
I'm greatly looking forward to BB2 and to hear that the end is in sight somewhere out there is marvelous!
I'm sure Glorfindel realizes he's suffering in a good cause.

Date: 2012-12-04 00:39 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Glorfindel = one very displeased elf. But he'll get over it. It could have been worse. Or better. Or something :D

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