keiliss: (m_erestor by red_lasbelin. GIFT)
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Title: The Naked Peach
Pairing: Erestor/Glorfindel
Beta: Red Lasbelin
Written for: B2MeM - prompts: humid, fuzzy, sex (it's almost a title)
Summary: some like it hot.

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“I can’t believe it’s this hot even with the wind blowing.”

Amused, Glorfindel left the window with its spectacular sea view and chose a round, yellow fruit with a pink flush from a nearby table set with heaped bowls of fruit, nuts and sweetmeats. Sitting on the edge of the canopied divan, he offered it to Erestor, who was lounging back against pillows, hair piled untidily atop his head. “Here, try this. Something sweet to cool your irritation.”

“Oh funny.” Erestor took the proffered fruit and examined it. “What is this? I’ve not seen these before. I’ve only tried the dried figs so far, they seemed safest.”

“Staying with what you know? You’re normally more adventurous,” Glorfindel chuckled. “I asked the girl who brought us fresh towels, and this is a peach. The darker, rough skinned ones are oranges, which you have to peel, and the little ones are loquats. Why not take your tunic off if you’re suffering that much, no one’ll come in here except the servants.”

Erestor sighed, pulled the tunic over his head and dropped it onto the divan, then set about unfastening his shirt. “It’s just that it’s so humid. I can’t take humidity. I like my heat dry.”

“It gets humid in Mithlond and I don’t hear you complain.”

“It doesn’t get like this, not where my hair starts sticking to my neck and all I want to do is go wade out in the sea.”

“You could if you wanted to? I’d just tell our hosts you had a strange religious rite that required immersion in the sea?”

“Oh, riiight.” Erestor picked up the peach again, sniffed it and began examining it closely. Glorfindel liked watching him with new things; he was like a cat, cautious and exploratory. “So strange that they don’t swim when they’re right by the ocean.”

“It’s about modesty, they only undress in front of their partners. Otherwise no flesh on display, just face and hands.”

“Very strange when you think of the dancing girls at the welcome dinner. They were next to naked.”

“They have different rules for girls who aren’t decently married,” Glorfindel told him. He had read up about local customs, partly from works selected for him by Erestor himself, who had either not read them or had skimmed everything except politics and history. This was Glorfindel’s mission, Erestor was there purely as an observer and was taking full advantage of the fact.

“Asexual in public and yet dancing girls who were handed out to the guests after, multiple wives, concubines of both genders – in fact three genders, there are eunuchs, too… and no trips to the beach even in the height of summer.” Erestor shook his head and loops of black hair threatened to work free from the impromptu topknot.

“Be flexible. Their views on sex and the body are more conservative than ours, that’s all.”

Erestor looked at him from under lowered lashes. “I am flexible. I have never heard you complain about my flexibility.”

Glorfindel grinned. “This is true. Seriously though, if we’re to cement an agreement between Lindon and the Prince and gain a reliable informant here in the south, we can’t afford to complicate things with differing approaches to sex and nudity.”

“I know all that. I read all the documents, remember? Even the ones I probably wasn’t supposed to.” Erestor was stroking the peach now, passing his thumb lightly across the surface. “It’s --- fuzzy. Look at the skin, it has little hairs on it. Are you sure it’s meant to be like this?”

Amber eyes pinned him searchingly. Glorfindel smiled and circled Erestor’s wrist with his fingers, bringing the hand holding the peach closer for a better look. “It is a bit, isn’t it? Rather like your naked bottom and probably just as inviting.”

Erestor snatched his hand back. “My bum is not fuzzy, don’t be ridiculous.” He bit into the peach and pressed his mouth against the flesh to stop the juice from dripping all over his hand. Swallowing he said, “Oh, now that tastes wonderful, you were right. Sweet and refreshing…”

“Can I taste?”

“Yes, of course. Here…” He held the peach out, but Glorfindel ignored his hand and leaned in to lick slowly up from Erestor’s chin to the corner of his mouth.

“Mm, you’re right. Sweet. Any more?”

Giving him a level look, Erestor deliberately drizzled peach juice in a line down the centre of his chest, careful to avoid his clothing. Glorfindel felt the twist of lust, nodded and leaned forward, lapping warm skin. Above his head he heard Erestor take another bite. He brushed a dusky nipple roughly with the ball of his thumb, then kissed his way up to the fruit-sweet mouth.

“It’s far too hot for this.” Erestor’s voice was husky-soft, his tone belying the words.

“Heat feeds heat,” Glorfindel responded, equally low, reaching up to undo the piled hair. “Hot and humid needn’t always be a bad thing. Come, let me show you, creature of the icy north.”

Their foreheads were almost touching, eyes too close for a wider view, so all he could see of Erestor was flushed skin, parted lips and cascading ink-black hair. Glorfindel felt a hand rest on the centre of his chest followed by a slight push. He drew back at once, looking a question. Erestor smiled that slow, seductive smile that turned his insides molten and held up the peach. “Should we share this?”

Glorfindel took it and rubbed his lips against the skin: Erestor was right, fuzzy was the word for it. “I think so. Slowly though, because I want some left by the time I get where I’m going. I still want to see how much your gorgeous rear truly resembles a peach.”

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Date: 2012-05-12 15:37 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scarlet1061.livejournal.com
Be flexible. Their views on sex and the body are more conservative than ours, that’s all.”
Erestor looked at him from under lowered lashes. “I am flexible. I have never heard you complain about my flexibility.”


Ah, lol, if ever there was an intended double meaning to misunderstanding.....

This short, hot tale reminded me of the humid-hot mid-summer days that I defiantly don't miss, but just as surely, won't be able to escape....

Lovely, *wide smile*

Date: 2012-05-12 18:06 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

I'm with Erestor about humidity - I can get along quite happily without it. Loooove winter.

Date: 2012-05-12 16:54 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phyncke.livejournal.com
I knew that was a juicy peach and something erotic was going to happen with the juice to skin thing. Good! I am kind of interested in what happens on their (or Glorfindel's) mission. That little backdrop would be interesting to see more of. Fun read here. :)

Date: 2012-05-12 18:16 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks for the feedback, Jane - glad you liked it :) I admit I'm nervous to write them in Harad (or wherever this is) in the second age, because Elfscribe did it so brilliantly in Osse's Gift and I find it hard to get my imagination past that. But - it is kind of tempting this time, I'll admit *g* Specially as I have no clue what's going on there yet.

So - maybe....

*hugs*

Date: 2012-05-12 18:26 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phyncke.livejournal.com
Snippets could be good. Not a full length fic. Not sure but it is an intriguing glimpse so far.

Date: 2012-05-12 17:24 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
And here I had a story already in the works using a different duo and a juicy orange... Oh well, you did this much better. I'll throw mine into the digital trash and try again - LOL.

- Erulisse (one L)

Date: 2012-05-12 18:27 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
LOL! Oh no, we really have to stop doing this! Seriously though, don't bin what you've written. It's not like the idea originated with either of us - it's a well-used genre, but always loads of fun to see different interpretations. And I'm happy you liked mine - thank you :)

Date: 2012-05-12 19:18 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
I'm finding it really funny that this is twice in three months that we have had similar story foci. Mine is set back when Maglor and Denis first meet, and maybe I won't bin it, but it is one of those "back story" pieces I have that may never see the light of day except for my personal computer screen. I loved yours....

- Erulisse (one L)

Date: 2012-05-12 18:44 (UTC)
minuial_nuwing: (White Shell by Aglarien)
From: [personal profile] minuial_nuwing
I'm with Erestor on the humidity - heat is bearable, but when you have to wring out your hair, things are bad. :P That image of the peach was quite refreshing, though. ;)

I adore these characters and I would dearly love to read about Glorfindel's mission to the South in more detail!

**hugs**

Date: 2012-05-12 20:27 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Hate humidity, I'm with Erestor about preferring dry heat any day ---- or even better, no heat, just gentle warmth.

I have no idea what Glorfindel's doing in the south, why Erestor is only there as an observer, or who they're treating with and it's starting to niggle at me. Thanks for the feedback, darling, glad you enjoyed this - love writing these two so much.

*hugs tight*

Date: 2012-05-12 21:57 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaotic-binky.livejournal.com
Erestor eating a peach is always a winner with me :D

Where are they supposed to be?

*hugs*

Date: 2012-05-15 21:56 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Where are they supposed to be? Um -- that is a good question, yes :D I'm guessing Harad or somewhere around there, but I'm not yet quite clear where or why or with whom or any of that stuff --- they just showed up and who am I to argue with Erestor and a peach?

Date: 2012-05-13 00:11 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aglarien1.livejournal.com
That was wonderful, as always, Kei! I totally agree with Erestor on the humidity.

Date: 2012-05-15 21:59 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Humidity kills me, too. It's a while since I've had fun with them, so I was happy when they showed up - I'm so glad you liked it, Agie.

Date: 2012-05-13 09:22 (UTC)
hhimring: Estel, inscription by D. Salo (Default)
From: [personal profile] hhimring
That really is a major contrast to the Helcaraxe. Poor Erestor, he needs a private indoor swimming pool.
I think Elfscribe's "Osse's Gift" is a wonderful story, but there's definitely space for another mission of Glorfindel and Erestor to Harad and I would be all for it!

Date: 2012-05-15 22:12 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Who'd be an elf? Struggling across the ice one minute, sweltering in a semi desert environment the next - peaches or not :D I know next to nothing about Harad, of course. Never set my sights that far south, never beta read anything that took place around there either... it's tempting... In fact I don't think I've ever written them as a second age couple either. New ground is always interesting....

I can't believe I'm considering this!

Date: 2012-05-13 12:11 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/fishyz9_/
Loved, loved, loved this :)

Date: 2012-05-15 22:14 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
*hugs the Fish* Thank you, dear. That makes me very happy. I haven't written them together for a while and I'd been missing them :)

Date: 2012-05-13 22:20 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idleleaves.livejournal.com
Ooh, that was niiice. I adore your Erestor in any incarnation. ♥

(Have to agree with him about the heat. Humidity is the devil.)

Date: 2012-05-15 22:22 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Thank you :) When I started writing in the fandom, I had no interest in writing Erestor, so it was quite strange when I realised after a while he was in every single fic I wrote, LOL. Eventually I gave up fighting - just rather enjoy his company. I'm glad you liked this moment in time --- I think that's the best description for it as I know nothing about the when, where or why of :D Still, it was fun to write.

(humidity is from the devil!!!!!)

Date: 2012-05-23 20:42 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com
Humidity is evil, but some things are more important. Particularly when someone like Glorfindel is looking at you Like That.

This was such fun and the peach comparison...I'm sure it turned out well. :)

Date: 2012-05-24 14:01 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
*g* I was curious about how well Erestor and the peach matched up, but somehow I don't think Glorfindel will share that information. Pity!

Date: 2012-05-30 03:04 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melusine6619.livejournal.com
Absolutely yummy!

Date: 2012-07-04 01:42 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I love writing these two, glad you liked it.

*hugs*

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