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keilissTitle: Do You Know the Way to Pearly Bay?
Characters: Aredhel, Celegorm.
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Rating: PG?
Summary: Real men don't ask for directions.
Note: written for Zhie for the Midwinter Festival.
Note: Aredhel, Celegorm OR Aredhel/Celegorm. However you want to read it. I have no idea and I'm too intimidated to ask them. They'll force me to write another fic.
Do You Know the Way To Pearly Bay?
“Just ask them!” Aredhel wiggled in frustration. She would have tapped her foot in impatience had she not been on horseback. “Just ride up to them, say good afternoon, and ask them if this is the road to Pearly Bay.”
Celegorm watched the small line of woodcutters vanishing off between the trees but made no move to follow them. “We’ll find it on our own,” he said for the third time. “It has to be somewhere along here. It’s on the coast just past Avallónë and there’s a mountain behind it, or so he said in his letter.”
Aredhel finally exploded. “Everything here is on the coast or close to. This is an island, Celegorm. Surrounded by water? And there are mountains everywhere. Admit it, please. We’re lost!”
Celegorm shook his head stubbornly. “No we’re not. We just haven’t ridden far enough yet.”
“It’ll be night soon. What do you intend to do then, camp on the side of the road?”
Celegorm glared at her. “You never had a problem camping in the forest back in the old days,” he growled. “I remember how you used to like hunting down a nice, plump bunny for dinner, watching the stars…”
”…getting it in the neck from my father, my brothers, anyone who happened to hear I’d spent the night away from home with you,” she finished off, her tone sharp. “Yes, well, that was a long time ago. I’ve grown up since then, got quite used to sleeping in a bed.”
Celegorm rolled his eyes. He had finally been released from Mandos a couple of weeks previously and had been thrilled to find Aredhel all but waiting at the gate for him, but was starting to wish she would stop reminding him how much time had passed and how mature she now thought she was.
“Why didn’t you ask them the way?”
One thing hadn’t changed; once she had an idea in her head she was as tenacious with it as fleas in a blanket. It was a wonder she hadn’t driven Turgon crazy back there over the sea. Mind, what he’d heard of the setup in Gondolin didn’t speak well for that cousin’s probable sanity.
“Don’t need to,” he retorted. “We have the stars and our own sense of direction, and Tol Eressëa isn’t all that big really. Would only take a few days to ride around it if we had to. Which we won’t. I don’t ask directions. That’s for people with no personal resources.”
Aredhel stared at him, disbelief written across her fair face and blazing from her clear, grey eyes. “I can’t believe it. You were embarrassed to ask? We’re going to end up camping out without a tent or groundcloth or – anything – because you were too damn embarrassed to ask for directions?”
“Men don’t ask for directions. That’s for helpless women who can’t read the stars.”
Her mouth forsook its habitual sensual pout and dropped open as she stared at him. After a minute she recalled herself and closed it smartly. “I’ll have you know that when I left Gondolin with those idiots Glorfindel and Ecthelion – and Egalmoth, least said about him the better – I was the only person who had a clue where we were going. I left them in the end and made my own way. My only worry was whether they would find their way home without me.”
And look where that all ended up, Celegorm thought, though he had the sense to say nothing. He had been carefully briefed about his family’s exploits before Lord Námo let him leave, and Aredhel’s story was amongst the least surprising. Trust her, she always liked the bad boys.
Fingolfin’s daughter produced a rather squashed bunch of purple grapes in her saddlebag and proceeded to eat them one at a time, peeling the skin off efficiently with her teeth before sucking them into her mouth and chewing slowly and with savour. At any other time the effect would have been devastatingly erotic. She very pointedly did not offer any to Celegorm.
They rode on. Aredhel craned her neck to look around, but the elves they had seen earlier had apparently vanished. “I would have asked them myself if i had realised you were too chicken,” she said darkly. “I’m not scared to admit I don’t know where I am. Not in a strange place. And anyone we talk to must surely know where to find Glorfindel. Big, blonde, not terribly bright…”
“They wouldn’t have known him,” her cousin cut in.
Aredhel blinked. “Why ever not? How many people living around here could fit that description?”
Celegorm’s jaw muscles twitched. “Well yes, but they were Sindar. Not likely to know a Noldorin lord.”
“Don’t be silly,” Aredhel rejoined. “A good third of the people in Gondolin were Sindar. And from what I’ve heard, they made up the majority east of the sea after the First Age. They’d be the best people to ask. The only Sindar who had nothing to do with us were those in Doriath, so unless they were….” She fell silent, then shot a sidelong glance at her tall, impossibly good looking cousin. “Ah.”
“What do you mean, ‘ah’?” Celegorm saw where this was going and urged his horse forward, but Aredhel kept pace with him effortlessly.
“Just ‘ah’. You weren’t just embarrassed about asking for directions. You didn’t want to talk to them in case they came from Doriath.”
“Never crossed my mind.”
“No, of course not dear.” Aredhel smiled smugly. “Not a cause for concern at all. No chance they might recognise you and find another use to put their axes to.”
“Now you’re being ridiculous,” he snapped. “This is the edge of the Undying Lands. No one gets killed here…”
They stared at one another.
“Oh all right. There was Grandfather.”
“Yes indeed there was.”
“And… Yes.”
They exchanged eloquent looks. The least said about Alqualondé the better.
“I’m sure if they’d been in Doriath when you --- came calling, their time in the Halls would have given them some perspective on things,” Aredhel said in an attempt to be reassuring. “And as for the survivors? It was a very long time ago. And it wasn’t your fault anyway. Blame Maedhros.”
“Hmph.” Celegorm shot her a sharp look, then compressed his lips and made a business of studying the sun’s angle to estimate the hour.
“Really. Just – don’t worry about it. Unless you run into Dior and Nimloth, of course. Then you might want to say sorry.”
Silence.
“Well, whatever,” Aredhel finished, apparently realizing it was time to drop the subject. “Anyhow, I think right now we…”
“They’re not living here, are they?” he asked abruptly, clearing his throat roughly. “Glorfindel would have mentioned it, wouldn’t he? He’d know, right? About me maybe not wanting to run into them.”
Aredhel reached over and patted his arm, acknowledging how hard it must have been for him to admit his concern. There had always been an exceptional degree of trust between them. “Oh, I’m sure he knows the whole story by now,” she said. “He had two ages to catch up on the gossip about what we’d all done and where and why. In his letter, he sounded quite up to date and really looking forward to meeting up with everyone again.”
Glorfindel had arrived from Middle-earth around the same time Celegorm had been released from Lord Námo’s care, and like many who had spent a long time in the east had made his home on the Lonely Isle. He had written long, chatty letters to several old friends and relatives, inviting them to visit while he and those who had sailed with him settled into their new lives. He had made no mention of grudge-bearing Sindar, but then he had not been expecting Celegorm. Aredhel, bored witless with the social round in Tirion, had accepted almost as soon as she finished reading the friendly missive and had then set about persuading Celegorm to keep her company on the journey.
It had all started well. They had ridden to the coast, taken the ferry across to Avallónë, collected their horses, and set out to find the cottage by the sea that the half-Vanyar former lord of the House of the Golden Flower had been at such pains to describe. Just north of the town, he had said, overlooking the sea. On the road to Pearly Bay Can’t miss it.
While they were talking, the horses carried them through the trees and out into the open again. The sea sparkled up at them from the bottom of the steep drop to their left, the wave-caps dancing white in the late afternoon sunlight. Just ahead of them, a tall elf came into view, trudging along on the mountain side of the road. A fishing rod was slung over his shoulder, and he carried three silvery fish threaded on a stick.
“Right, I’ll ask then,” Aredhel said determinedly. “There isn’t a house for miles here.”
“Manwë’s Balls, do you never give up…?”
“Hush! You can’t say that here.”
“Oh yes I can.”
“That attitude is what got you into trouble in the first place. And he’s not Sindar either. Look at his hair. Definitely Noldor.”
Aredhel sat a little straighter and tilted her chin up fetchingly. “Excuse me,” she hailed, urging her horse forward. The elf looked her up and down, apparently unimpressed. She reined in and tried her brightest smile, the one that Cousin Artanis – she couldn’t get used to that stupid new name – said looked like a cat that had swallowed the house finch. “Would you happen to know where we could find Glorfindel of Gondolin? He’s --- about your height? With long blonde hair and blue eyes. Recently arrived from Endor?”
The elf startled her by spitting off to the side of the road. “New arrivals,” he muttered. “Place is crawling with them all of a sudden.”
Celegorm had caught up with them and waited, affecting a bored expression. “I’m sure he hasn’t a clue where Glorfindel lives,” he told Aredhel. “Stop wasting his time. If we just keep going along this road, we’ll find him eventually.”
“That you won’t,” the elf informed him. “Not along here.”
“Oh for --- come on, Ari, we’re wasting our time here. You were worried about it getting dark.”
“Wait,” Aredhel said imperiously. Keeping pace beside the elf, she asked sweetly, “Not along here? Why would that be?”
“Back that way, way you’ve come,” he replied, jerking a thumb over his shoulder. “Go into town, take the lower road that passes the harbour, keep riding, it’s just after the ostriches. Can’t miss it. Got a hulking great flag out front, big gold flower on a purple background.”
“But he said north,” Celegorm argued, genuinely puzzled. “And this is…”
“This road heads east,” the elf told him with a look of unveiled disgust. “Back there in town, you turn north from the harbour, follow the road up.”
Aredhel was careful not to look in her cousin’s direction while she thanked the fisherman and bade him a hearty meal. They turned back the way they had come, riding in silence. Finally Celegorm broke it. “Could have sworn this was north. Must have turned the directions around when they --- bent the sea. Or whatever they did with it. Can’t get my head around that one. But this was always north before.”
Aredhel nodded placatingly. “I’m sure it was, dear,” she agreed. “Just got all turned around, yes. It would have been so much easier if we’d arrived at night.”
Celegorm gave her a suspicious look. Somewhere in a corner of his mind that he disliked exploring he had always suspected Aredhel was smarter than him. In an even deeper corner dwelt a little voice that had on occasion very softly suggested that perhaps she thought so too. “Night? Why would arriving at night have helped?”
“Stars,” Aredhel said airily. “After all, you said men never ask for directions, All they really need are the stars to guide them? And now,” she went on, tossing her dark hair back over her shoulders, “Let’s try and get back to town before it grows dark enough to put that to the test. Come on, I’ll race you to the first crossroads. Winner gets to ask Findel about the balrog.”
ooOoo
Finis?
Characters: Aredhel, Celegorm.
Beta:
red_lasbelinRating: PG?
Summary: Real men don't ask for directions.
Note: written for Zhie for the Midwinter Festival.
Note: Aredhel, Celegorm OR Aredhel/Celegorm. However you want to read it. I have no idea and I'm too intimidated to ask them. They'll force me to write another fic.
“Just ask them!” Aredhel wiggled in frustration. She would have tapped her foot in impatience had she not been on horseback. “Just ride up to them, say good afternoon, and ask them if this is the road to Pearly Bay.”
Celegorm watched the small line of woodcutters vanishing off between the trees but made no move to follow them. “We’ll find it on our own,” he said for the third time. “It has to be somewhere along here. It’s on the coast just past Avallónë and there’s a mountain behind it, or so he said in his letter.”
Aredhel finally exploded. “Everything here is on the coast or close to. This is an island, Celegorm. Surrounded by water? And there are mountains everywhere. Admit it, please. We’re lost!”
Celegorm shook his head stubbornly. “No we’re not. We just haven’t ridden far enough yet.”
“It’ll be night soon. What do you intend to do then, camp on the side of the road?”
Celegorm glared at her. “You never had a problem camping in the forest back in the old days,” he growled. “I remember how you used to like hunting down a nice, plump bunny for dinner, watching the stars…”
”…getting it in the neck from my father, my brothers, anyone who happened to hear I’d spent the night away from home with you,” she finished off, her tone sharp. “Yes, well, that was a long time ago. I’ve grown up since then, got quite used to sleeping in a bed.”
Celegorm rolled his eyes. He had finally been released from Mandos a couple of weeks previously and had been thrilled to find Aredhel all but waiting at the gate for him, but was starting to wish she would stop reminding him how much time had passed and how mature she now thought she was.
“Why didn’t you ask them the way?”
One thing hadn’t changed; once she had an idea in her head she was as tenacious with it as fleas in a blanket. It was a wonder she hadn’t driven Turgon crazy back there over the sea. Mind, what he’d heard of the setup in Gondolin didn’t speak well for that cousin’s probable sanity.
“Don’t need to,” he retorted. “We have the stars and our own sense of direction, and Tol Eressëa isn’t all that big really. Would only take a few days to ride around it if we had to. Which we won’t. I don’t ask directions. That’s for people with no personal resources.”
Aredhel stared at him, disbelief written across her fair face and blazing from her clear, grey eyes. “I can’t believe it. You were embarrassed to ask? We’re going to end up camping out without a tent or groundcloth or – anything – because you were too damn embarrassed to ask for directions?”
“Men don’t ask for directions. That’s for helpless women who can’t read the stars.”
Her mouth forsook its habitual sensual pout and dropped open as she stared at him. After a minute she recalled herself and closed it smartly. “I’ll have you know that when I left Gondolin with those idiots Glorfindel and Ecthelion – and Egalmoth, least said about him the better – I was the only person who had a clue where we were going. I left them in the end and made my own way. My only worry was whether they would find their way home without me.”
And look where that all ended up, Celegorm thought, though he had the sense to say nothing. He had been carefully briefed about his family’s exploits before Lord Námo let him leave, and Aredhel’s story was amongst the least surprising. Trust her, she always liked the bad boys.
Fingolfin’s daughter produced a rather squashed bunch of purple grapes in her saddlebag and proceeded to eat them one at a time, peeling the skin off efficiently with her teeth before sucking them into her mouth and chewing slowly and with savour. At any other time the effect would have been devastatingly erotic. She very pointedly did not offer any to Celegorm.
They rode on. Aredhel craned her neck to look around, but the elves they had seen earlier had apparently vanished. “I would have asked them myself if i had realised you were too chicken,” she said darkly. “I’m not scared to admit I don’t know where I am. Not in a strange place. And anyone we talk to must surely know where to find Glorfindel. Big, blonde, not terribly bright…”
“They wouldn’t have known him,” her cousin cut in.
Aredhel blinked. “Why ever not? How many people living around here could fit that description?”
Celegorm’s jaw muscles twitched. “Well yes, but they were Sindar. Not likely to know a Noldorin lord.”
“Don’t be silly,” Aredhel rejoined. “A good third of the people in Gondolin were Sindar. And from what I’ve heard, they made up the majority east of the sea after the First Age. They’d be the best people to ask. The only Sindar who had nothing to do with us were those in Doriath, so unless they were….” She fell silent, then shot a sidelong glance at her tall, impossibly good looking cousin. “Ah.”
“What do you mean, ‘ah’?” Celegorm saw where this was going and urged his horse forward, but Aredhel kept pace with him effortlessly.
“Just ‘ah’. You weren’t just embarrassed about asking for directions. You didn’t want to talk to them in case they came from Doriath.”
“Never crossed my mind.”
“No, of course not dear.” Aredhel smiled smugly. “Not a cause for concern at all. No chance they might recognise you and find another use to put their axes to.”
“Now you’re being ridiculous,” he snapped. “This is the edge of the Undying Lands. No one gets killed here…”
They stared at one another.
“Oh all right. There was Grandfather.”
“Yes indeed there was.”
“And… Yes.”
They exchanged eloquent looks. The least said about Alqualondé the better.
“I’m sure if they’d been in Doriath when you --- came calling, their time in the Halls would have given them some perspective on things,” Aredhel said in an attempt to be reassuring. “And as for the survivors? It was a very long time ago. And it wasn’t your fault anyway. Blame Maedhros.”
“Hmph.” Celegorm shot her a sharp look, then compressed his lips and made a business of studying the sun’s angle to estimate the hour.
“Really. Just – don’t worry about it. Unless you run into Dior and Nimloth, of course. Then you might want to say sorry.”
Silence.
“Well, whatever,” Aredhel finished, apparently realizing it was time to drop the subject. “Anyhow, I think right now we…”
“They’re not living here, are they?” he asked abruptly, clearing his throat roughly. “Glorfindel would have mentioned it, wouldn’t he? He’d know, right? About me maybe not wanting to run into them.”
Aredhel reached over and patted his arm, acknowledging how hard it must have been for him to admit his concern. There had always been an exceptional degree of trust between them. “Oh, I’m sure he knows the whole story by now,” she said. “He had two ages to catch up on the gossip about what we’d all done and where and why. In his letter, he sounded quite up to date and really looking forward to meeting up with everyone again.”
Glorfindel had arrived from Middle-earth around the same time Celegorm had been released from Lord Námo’s care, and like many who had spent a long time in the east had made his home on the Lonely Isle. He had written long, chatty letters to several old friends and relatives, inviting them to visit while he and those who had sailed with him settled into their new lives. He had made no mention of grudge-bearing Sindar, but then he had not been expecting Celegorm. Aredhel, bored witless with the social round in Tirion, had accepted almost as soon as she finished reading the friendly missive and had then set about persuading Celegorm to keep her company on the journey.
It had all started well. They had ridden to the coast, taken the ferry across to Avallónë, collected their horses, and set out to find the cottage by the sea that the half-Vanyar former lord of the House of the Golden Flower had been at such pains to describe. Just north of the town, he had said, overlooking the sea. On the road to Pearly Bay Can’t miss it.
While they were talking, the horses carried them through the trees and out into the open again. The sea sparkled up at them from the bottom of the steep drop to their left, the wave-caps dancing white in the late afternoon sunlight. Just ahead of them, a tall elf came into view, trudging along on the mountain side of the road. A fishing rod was slung over his shoulder, and he carried three silvery fish threaded on a stick.
“Right, I’ll ask then,” Aredhel said determinedly. “There isn’t a house for miles here.”
“Manwë’s Balls, do you never give up…?”
“Hush! You can’t say that here.”
“Oh yes I can.”
“That attitude is what got you into trouble in the first place. And he’s not Sindar either. Look at his hair. Definitely Noldor.”
Aredhel sat a little straighter and tilted her chin up fetchingly. “Excuse me,” she hailed, urging her horse forward. The elf looked her up and down, apparently unimpressed. She reined in and tried her brightest smile, the one that Cousin Artanis – she couldn’t get used to that stupid new name – said looked like a cat that had swallowed the house finch. “Would you happen to know where we could find Glorfindel of Gondolin? He’s --- about your height? With long blonde hair and blue eyes. Recently arrived from Endor?”
The elf startled her by spitting off to the side of the road. “New arrivals,” he muttered. “Place is crawling with them all of a sudden.”
Celegorm had caught up with them and waited, affecting a bored expression. “I’m sure he hasn’t a clue where Glorfindel lives,” he told Aredhel. “Stop wasting his time. If we just keep going along this road, we’ll find him eventually.”
“That you won’t,” the elf informed him. “Not along here.”
“Oh for --- come on, Ari, we’re wasting our time here. You were worried about it getting dark.”
“Wait,” Aredhel said imperiously. Keeping pace beside the elf, she asked sweetly, “Not along here? Why would that be?”
“Back that way, way you’ve come,” he replied, jerking a thumb over his shoulder. “Go into town, take the lower road that passes the harbour, keep riding, it’s just after the ostriches. Can’t miss it. Got a hulking great flag out front, big gold flower on a purple background.”
“But he said north,” Celegorm argued, genuinely puzzled. “And this is…”
“This road heads east,” the elf told him with a look of unveiled disgust. “Back there in town, you turn north from the harbour, follow the road up.”
Aredhel was careful not to look in her cousin’s direction while she thanked the fisherman and bade him a hearty meal. They turned back the way they had come, riding in silence. Finally Celegorm broke it. “Could have sworn this was north. Must have turned the directions around when they --- bent the sea. Or whatever they did with it. Can’t get my head around that one. But this was always north before.”
Aredhel nodded placatingly. “I’m sure it was, dear,” she agreed. “Just got all turned around, yes. It would have been so much easier if we’d arrived at night.”
Celegorm gave her a suspicious look. Somewhere in a corner of his mind that he disliked exploring he had always suspected Aredhel was smarter than him. In an even deeper corner dwelt a little voice that had on occasion very softly suggested that perhaps she thought so too. “Night? Why would arriving at night have helped?”
“Stars,” Aredhel said airily. “After all, you said men never ask for directions, All they really need are the stars to guide them? And now,” she went on, tossing her dark hair back over her shoulders, “Let’s try and get back to town before it grows dark enough to put that to the test. Come on, I’ll race you to the first crossroads. Winner gets to ask Findel about the balrog.”
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Date: 2009-03-25 23:43 (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-03-25 23:58 (UTC)**hugs**
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:22 (UTC)***hugs you***
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Date: 2009-03-26 02:12 (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:25 (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2009-03-26 03:17 (UTC)This is so cute!! Love it!
Why does Aredhel/Celegorm make perfect sense now? Oh, I miss playing her... *sigh*
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:28 (UTC)Heh, the whole time I was writing this, I thought of you. I wonder why? *g*.
**hugs**
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Date: 2009-03-26 12:19 (UTC)Hugs Binky xxx
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:31 (UTC)**hugs**
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:46 (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-26 23:51 (UTC)Yep.
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:56 (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-26 17:31 (UTC)>>They’d be the best people to ask. The only Sindar who had nothing to do with us were those in Doriath, so unless they were….” She fell silent, then shot a sidelong glance at her tall, impossibly good looking cousin. “Ah.”<<
"Ah", indeed. :-( Not just machismo, eh?
“Could have sworn this was north. Must have turned the directions around when they --- bent the sea. Or whatever they did with it. Can’t get my head around that one. But this was always north before.”
LMAO
Oh, this one just cracked me up! Sure - that's what 'they' did: turned the directions, just to confuse Celegorm.
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Date: 2009-03-26 23:40 (UTC)Thanks so much for commenting, dear - glad you liked it. I owe Zhie thanks for the requests - I'd never have written these two otherwise, and I had fun with them.
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Date: 2009-03-27 23:20 (UTC)had been thrilled to find Aredhel all but waiting at the gate for him, but was starting to wish she would stop reminding him how much time had passed and how mature she now thought she was. The last seven words, neat. Very much liked that - amused me, and spoke to my present mood very nicely indeed...
Couple of word quibbles? previously rather than previous? And later on, Glorfindel would have mentioned (it) - I think it needs a word in there?
And anyone we talk to must surely know where to find Glorfindel. Big, blonde, not terribly bright…” Hey :| Not sure I'd feel comfortable with this woman. *affronted; feels protective and fond of G*
“And… Yes.”
They exchanged eloquent looks. The least said about Alqualondé the better.
“I’m sure if they’d been in Doriath when you --- came calling, Quite a dark little fic, this, surprisingly. A mixture of humour, sparking relationship - and an aching past. The bit about leaving Ecthelion and Glorfindel to find their way on leaving Gondolin, and Aredhel that sharply spoken about them - ouch?
In an even deeper corner dwelt a little voice that had on occasion very softly suggested that perhaps she thought so too. This really is an interesting story. I couldn't help enjoying the men not asking directions play. That's got to be the biggest excuse about the direction of north changing when the world was changed that I've yet come across for being wrong!
I think I'm more in the mood to feel sad about Gondolin and be cross with Aredhel for putting Glorfindel down - not in the mood for acerbic tongued women right now, but the strength of their intimacy, she and Celegorm, their ancient knowing of each other and the others, the spans of time past and histories unfolded since their beginnings - you write with real feeling for your contents :)
I rather liked the feel of Celegorm - I can imagine Aredhel very much liking him? He feels sort of stolid, slightly insecure and never going to admit it, very male, rather good looking, possible in love with her and terribly irritated by her. I'm left with a bright picture of their ride down the road and can still hear them arguing as they fade toward the town :D
You got a lot of history in there, with the Sindar, Doriath, and other references to people and groups of people, too. *waves* (Not rereading. Asleep.)
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Date: 2009-04-06 23:48 (UTC)It means a lot to me that you enjoyed reading this. At the time you posted your comment you left me feeling very happy to have such a response, and the glow hasn't faded.
The word quibbles first. I tried them both out loud to be sure I wasn't just manufacturing an excuse, but they're both local usage, something I do try to avoid but am more likely to miss in dialogue because I like to be able to hear them talking. The 'previous' is something I looked at a few times before posting, but it felt usable to me - thanks for pointing both out, it's something I like to avoid.
Aredhel - prickly piece, isn't she? I think that's her way of dealing with a life filled with more disasters than most - tongue like a wasp, liking her own way, all a means of protecting herself from the world perhaps? And she does seem to have a few issues with men --- can hardly blame her considering how she died :D Underneath is a kinder soul than is apparent I think - just doesn't show that side to many perhaps.
No, I don't really know what I'm talking about, but then these two took over my life for a while and would have stayed longer had I allowed them, and it was just enough for me to start getting a sense of who they are under the masks they wear for the world. Going deeper would have meant a story less suitable for Christmas, but yes, given who they both are, there would have to be a dark undercurrent. I think for them, even Aman would be an unquiet land.
I left them regretfully with two more pieces to write for the swap, and they were most annoyed with me for doing so. Partly I had a sense of playing with other people's elves, I admit, but I liked watching them and I could also hear them heading off down the road (hopefully) to find Glorfindel.
Thanks for the wonderful review :)
*finally registers icon* Oooooooh, it's Res's goats!!!!!!!
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Date: 2009-03-28 07:56 (UTC)I can just imagine Aredhel waiting for Celegorm to get out, and Celegorm emerging from Mandos like a convict out of prison. Their reunion trip quickly turns to this...this battle of the sexes over the directions.
He is right, his cousin is smarter than he is. I just love how he thinks that and knows that and thinks that she knows that. His paranoia is justified. So I suppose he is NOT that stupid.
I laughed the whole way through this. The descriptions are fresh and clean and serve to add to the humour each step of the way. My favorite little piece is the grumpy elf's slagging on Glorfindel's big yellow flower on a purple background. That IS very Glorfindel.
Just a delight. Really.
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Date: 2009-04-06 23:11 (UTC)You know that I have never written either of these before, of course. Never even thought of writing them, separately or together. But then I had the prompts and they seemed a good choice and… they took off with the story and I had my work cut out to keep it down to about 2 000 words (they tried to meet Gil-galad and Erestor on the road, nearly got to Glorfindel's house, all the rest, but I cut them off before it could turn into a ten chapter fic and they SULKED - lord, these two can sulk).
I had such a good time writing this, I laughed a lot, I had no idea what was going to happen next -- it's what writing should feel like. I am so happy you liked it because these are characters you know and understand, so I can't have messed them up too badly - I hope.
I love that you printed the stories out to read, I know what a compliment that is. Like the idea of you sitting comfortably and reading - words printed on paper still draw me into a story more totally than anything I might read on the monitor, so this means a lot. Thank you for all your comments and being so encouraging, it's something I needed quite badly right now and rereading your comments so I could reply to them helped my mood rather a lot.
Hope your shoulder feels a bit better.
**loves**