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Aug. 26th, 2006 02:33
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For Red

Title: Becoming
Word count: 300

Sort of fits into Doubt 21

Becoming


Before going downstairs to dinner, Glorfindel paused before the mirror above the washstand and examined his reflection. He had changed into a simple grey robe and had carefully arranged his hair in one of Gondolin’s more intricate styles, braiding sides and crown while leaving a loose fall of hair down the back.

Unbidden, he suddenly recalled that this was how he had been wearing it on the day he had died. The thought made him feel strange, as though he walked in two worlds simultaneously, and he shivered involuntarily. His image looked back at him with an air of assurance and poise the bore no resemblance to the uncertainty within, and received an ironic smile before he left the room and made his way downstairs to the verandah that ran along the sea-facing side of Master Edhelûr's house.

Several future Númenóreans, some of whom were known to him from the journey down to Forlond, were on the lawn, looking ill-at-ease in the unfamiliar surroundings. He noticed that one of them was standing off to the side, Laslech sitting beside him, firmly leashed. Glorfindel doubted the dog needed constraint; she looked too confused and frightened to consider running away.

He had begun to realise, with a little help from Gil-galad, that people really seemed to welcome it when he spoke to them first and so, taking the habitual deep breath and resisting the urge to mutter an excuse and head back indoors now that he was in the company of near-strangers, he went over and crouched down to pat the dog.

Smiling up at the boy who had her in his charge, he said, “So, you sail tomorrow? Have they told you how long it will take to get there? I have heard it takes almost two weeks to reach Valinor…”

Date: 2006-08-26 01:10 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com
OMG.

...

Glorfindel and Doubt? What did I do to deserve this? Not to mention Laslech... It's beautiful, dear. I like seeing a little scene out of Doubt - reminds me of the Painter.

I loved seeing the glimpse in Glory's mind and the signal that he was truly growing and adapting under the watchful eyes of people who care for him.

Date: 2006-08-26 02:33 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Thank you dear, I'm glad you liked this. I had a few lines I'd kept when I deleted the scene and - well - it's nice to finish it off properly. I know you love Glory, so...

Date: 2006-08-26 01:21 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chloe-amethyst.livejournal.com
I've really enjoyed reading your drabbles! They've been excellent and quite a pleasure. :-)

Date: 2006-08-26 02:50 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Oh thank you so much. It's lovely to get feedback like that. I've been having a great time writing them and I'm so pleased you've enjoyed them.

Date: 2006-08-27 15:32 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phyncke.livejournal.com
It is wonderful to see inside his head a little bit more. The thought about his hair and the deep breathe he takes before a social interaction. They all add to the full picture you get of your Glorfindel.

Such a short piece but it really says so much.

So worth reading.

Date: 2006-08-28 22:10 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
Hey dear. Thank you very much. You always leave such thoughtful fb. This piece is the kind of thing that usually just gets a line in a chapter outline as a comment about his personality, and it was nice to be able to get the chance to indulge myself and expand it for a change. Glad you enjoyed *hugs*

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